Ten ways to present the four service groups. AISV’s copy is unchanged in all six, including the item counts.
Three faults, and the second is the one that makes the current grid look wrong.The card is the page’s default object: it is used for almost every module, so using it again here tells the
reader nothing about what this section is, and a list of what a firm does should not look like a list of what can
go wrong. The four groups are uneven, seven, seven, seven and three, which in a 2x2 guarantees a ragged
bottom-right corner that no amount of styling fixes. And twenty-four hairline rows in four boxes is dense:
these are scan items, not reading items.
Every option either lets the columns run to their own lengths or compresses the lists so the difference stops
showing. The ground stays tint, since section 4 above is cream and section 6 below is NIGHT. The four icons are
the ones already in place, four of the eleven the mockup brief allows.
AFour columns, vertical rulesThe 2x2 becomes 1x4 and the ragged corner disappears, because each column simply ends where its own list ends. Vertical rules replace four boxes, so the section stops using the page’s default object and starts looking like what it is: a set of parallel services. At a quarter of the container each column is about 300px, which holds a two-line heading and one-word items comfortably.
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BOne bounded matrixThe card device used ONCE around all four instead of four times on a tinted ground, with 1px gaps drawing every divider at once. Inside each cell the seven items split into two sub-columns, which cuts the height roughly in half and makes the group with three items look deliberate rather than short. This is the closest option to what is there now, and the smallest change that fixes the corner.
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CFour rows, heading rail leftRows instead of a grid. Each group gets a 340px rail for its icon, heading and one-line summary, with the items flowing in three CSS columns beside it, so seven items and three items both make one tidy row. It reads fastest of the six, it is the only one where the four summaries can be compared without moving your eye sideways, and it is the most robust if AISV ever changes the item counts.
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D2x2, items as chipsThe twenty-four hairline rows become twenty-four small objects. These are scan items, not reading items, and a wrapped set of chips says "here is the range" where a vertical list says "read each of these". Height drops sharply and the uneven counts almost stop showing. The cost is that chips are a familiar product-page device and can read as lighter than a law firm may want.
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EFour columns, numbered, no rulesNo boxes and no dividers at all: space is the only separator, with a small index above each heading. It is the quietest of the six and it depends entirely on the tinted ground holding the columns together, which it does. Pick this if the section should feel like a plain statement of scope rather than a display of it.
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F2x2, no borders, items in two sub-columnsThe current shape with the box taken away and each list split into two sub-columns under a single top rule. It is the least disruptive option that still halves the height, and it keeps the 2x2 reading of "four areas" that a 1x4 row slightly weakens. The bottom-right group is still shorter than the rest, but at half the height the difference reads as a gap rather than as a hole.
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GFour full-bleed rows, alternating groundsRhythm without a single border: four rows running the full viewport width, alternating tint and white, each with its heading in a rail and its items flowing in three columns. The ground does all the separating, which is the cleanest possible answer to a section whose problem was too many boxes. Weigh it against the page though, since sections 2 and 4 are already full-bleed and this would make three.
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HTwo zones on one four-column gridThe section splits horizontally rather than into modules: the four icons, headings and summaries occupy a top zone, one rule, then the four item lists sit beneath in exactly the same four columns. The reader compares all four summaries in a single line before reading any list, which is the order the copy is actually written in. Nothing is bounded and every column edge lines up across both zones.
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INIGHT header strip on each groupThe heading stops being text on a card and becomes the card’s own top edge, in NIGHT with the icon in gold. It is the strongest and most structured of everything on this sheet, and it brings a controlled amount of weight to a page that is otherwise pale until section 6. The cost is that four dark strips is four accents in one screen, and section 6 immediately below is a full NIGHT band, so the two would need to be looked at together.
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JBenefit firstThe only option that changes what the reader meets first. AISV wrote both a category and a one-line benefit for each group; the current build shows the category large and the benefit small. This swaps them, so "Get help reviewing, negotiating, and creating agreements that protect your business" leads and "Contracts and Commercial Agreements" becomes the label above it. Same words, same order on the page, different order of importance.
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If you want one: C. It is the only option where the four summaries can be compared without
moving your eye sideways, it makes seven items and three items look equally deliberate, and it is the one that
still works if AISV changes the counts. A is the pick if the section should read as four parallel services rather
than four rows; F if the 2x2 reading of "four areas" is worth keeping.